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Recent Movie Reviews

59 Movie Reviews

Speedo makes a Video!

2013-03-23 20:10:46

I came for titties!

Epic Pie Time

2012-01-12 20:35:43

Eh.

I don't like My little ponies or bronies, but the dubstep made it better.
Hence the 8/10.

Mystic Forest

2012-01-12 17:27:22

Friendly Critique

Praise:
Nice choice of music.
Water animation good.
Trees and flurries very well animated.
Depth perception is B+.

Critic:
Walking animation needs LOTS of work.
Grass and ground needs more dimension.
Audio cuts in and out spastically throughout.
Title "Mystic Forest" is quite unoriginal.
Hair needs more frames than 3 bobbing up and down, and changing size and place in the frame.
Layout needed, like a title menu and an ending menu.

Voted a 7/10 for hopes that it will improve the next time.

Jessismith responds:

Well, thanks for taking the time to critique. I know this looks kind of cruddy, but it was just a quick something I threw together in my spare time for fun. I know that the walking animation needs a lot of work. I've never been any good at walking animations, and that was quickly thrown in anyway. And I agree on the grass and ground. I can't help the audio. It is just a glitch in the software rendering. I'll admit, I got very lazy with the hair and all. Stuff was taking forever, and I'd rather a sloppy frame by frame than have it flat with just tweening, like most folks do. I don't use flash to make my stuff, so I could not have a menu. Anyway, thank you. I don't know if there will be any improvement. I've always been a really horrible artist. I just animate for fun. :P

Recent Game Reviews

48 Game Reviews

Bulb Boy

2013-03-23 20:16:38

Great concept!

That was super hard though, especially the last level.

Bladed DEMO

2013-03-23 20:06:38

Even though this is a concept, it shouldn't be uploaded.
Just put it in your WIP thing, and show friends.
Won't blam, because it's not complete trash.

my first flash game