I came for titties!
I don't like My little ponies or bronies, but the dubstep made it better.
Hence the 8/10.
Nice choice of music.
Water animation good.
Trees and flurries very well animated.
Depth perception is B+.
Walking animation needs LOTS of work.
Grass and ground needs more dimension.
Audio cuts in and out spastically throughout.
Title "Mystic Forest" is quite unoriginal.
Hair needs more frames than 3 bobbing up and down, and changing size and place in the frame.
Layout needed, like a title menu and an ending menu.
Voted a 7/10 for hopes that it will improve the next time.
Well, thanks for taking the time to critique. I know this looks kind of cruddy, but it was just a quick something I threw together in my spare time for fun. I know that the walking animation needs a lot of work. I've never been any good at walking animations, and that was quickly thrown in anyway. And I agree on the grass and ground. I can't help the audio. It is just a glitch in the software rendering. I'll admit, I got very lazy with the hair and all. Stuff was taking forever, and I'd rather a sloppy frame by frame than have it flat with just tweening, like most folks do. I don't use flash to make my stuff, so I could not have a menu. Anyway, thank you. I don't know if there will be any improvement. I've always been a really horrible artist. I just animate for fun. :P
I didn't expect the ending. Hahhaha
thanks for your votes! ^_^ please check out my youtube, more flash animations =D
I have played this multiple times, and have thought the SAME thing. This was super funny.
Plus, Im wondering how each descendant has the SAME armor as the ancestor, and starts at the SAME level....
That joke was there and had to be cut, as it was getting pretty long... Chris should just post the whole thing :)
It is ok, however...
This is good for a beginning. You seem to have talent, but I would make a full length or even a flash short before uploading to new grounds.
Things like this are usually rated average.
Does not interest me.
This is just another animation trying to become popular by using the arrow to the knee joke. Quite frankly, it is unoriginal-this sort of parody has been done before.
Short and sweet.
Very original. I loved it. Made me laugh on multiple occasions. Well animated.
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