DunamisBeam's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mystic Forest]

Friendly Critique

Praise:
Nice choice of music.
Water animation good.
Trees and flurries very well animated.
Depth perception is B+.

Critic:
Walking animation needs LOTS of work.
Grass and ground needs more dimension.
Audio cuts in and out spastically throughout.
Title "Mystic Forest" is quite unoriginal.
Hair needs more frames than 3 bobbing up and down, and changing size and place in the frame.
Layout needed, like a title menu and an ending menu.

Voted a 7/10 for hopes that it will improve the next time.

Jessismith responds:

Well, thanks for taking the time to critique. I know this looks kind of cruddy, but it was just a quick something I threw together in my spare time for fun. I know that the walking animation needs a lot of work. I've never been any good at walking animations, and that was quickly thrown in anyway. And I agree on the grass and ground. I can't help the audio. It is just a glitch in the software rendering. I'll admit, I got very lazy with the hair and all. Stuff was taking forever, and I'd rather a sloppy frame by frame than have it flat with just tweening, like most folks do. I don't use flash to make my stuff, so I could not have a menu. Anyway, thank you. I don't know if there will be any improvement. I've always been a really horrible artist. I just animate for fun. :P

[Mario Christmas Special!]

Hhahah.

I didn't expect the ending. Hahhaha

tomiiatoe responds:

thanks for your votes! ^_^ please check out my youtube, more flash animations =D

[Infinity Blad]

HAhHha

I have played this multiple times, and have thought the SAME thing. This was super funny.

Plus, Im wondering how each descendant has the SAME armor as the ancestor, and starts at the SAME level....

RicePirate responds:

That joke was there and had to be cut, as it was getting pretty long... Chris should just post the whole thing :)

[Jake's ToI Sneak Peak]

Awsum

Kinda like Shoop da woop

LordJaja responds:

It's one of my inspirations

[The Bag]

THE GREATEST BAG MOVIE OF ALL TIME

It's so freaking sad.

This also HAS A PLOT, unlike other crap on Newgrounds that gets medals and poop.
5/5 10/10

Brewster responds:

Thanks man!

[Chaos War Ep.1]

Wow.

Interesting, but I've seen better. I like the blasts, that is the only reason it is 7/10 and 3/5.
(When someone fires a beam, it needs the screen to shake.)

JohnTheHedgechidna responds:

yeah i know, i'm still doing tests and stuff

[Blue vs. Green 2 Not Halo]

Your welcom.e

Pretty cool. I can help with the next one if you like. I have some great ideas, and if you want them, Ill PM you.

10/10
5/5

TheGreeNate responds:

Alright yo! Thanks for the review. I'll see if we can work something out!

[Intro to Cyanide43]

? Perplexed ?

Why did you re-upload? It is still good!

cyanide43 responds:

Yeah...Newgrounds was having some publishing problems, you know? I dunno what happened...

[Mario vs DS Sonic Preview]

NICE!!!!

We need good spriters at www.smashbrosepitome.forumotion.com!
Please join!

polorichy responds:

Well, Thank You!, I Will Think About It

[UAD Revamp Ep.4]

Ummm

Needs work.

Reztic responds:

Next time elaborate please.